Thanks for sharing your pitch! Great start by putting yourself in the shoes of a college student who is effected by this issue. You were very specific when it came to how to make money! This doesn’t leave me wanting to ask more questions! The information was thought out but I would love to see some more specifics. How many scooter thefts happen in Gainesville, or the state, or in touristy places so we can get a sense of how frequently this happens and how likely is it going to happen to you.
Hi Mady! This is an awesome pitch! I love that you told the story about running late to class in the beginning to set the stage for your idea. I love that you radiated confidence in your delivery and you gave specific product details that really brought the product to life. I would have loved to hear more statistics on how often scooter theft happens on college campuses to make it feel even more urgent that a product like this needs to exist. Great job!
Hi Mady! Great pitch you clearly identified why your 3 in 1 anti-theft and tracker device is needed for scooters. With so many robberies and theft in scooters, especially in college towns like UF, a system in which you can secure your scooter and track it if it is stolen is critical. I thought you had great flow throughout your presentation and highlighted exactly why, how, and who would be affected by your opportunity belief.
Hey Mady, good job on your elevator pitch. I can tell that you rehearsed this and spent a lot of time trying to get it right. What really carried you was your confidence. Confidence is I feel the most important part of the elevator pitch, because it is vital to selling the product! It builds trust with your audience and makes them more likely to believe in your pitch.
Thanks for sharing your pitch! Great start by putting yourself in the shoes of a college student who is effected by this issue. You were very specific when it came to how to make money! This doesn’t leave me wanting to ask more questions! The information was thought out but I would love to see some more specifics. How many scooter thefts happen in Gainesville, or the state, or in touristy places so we can get a sense of how frequently this happens and how likely is it going to happen to you.
ReplyDeleteHi Mady! This is an awesome pitch! I love that you told the story about running late to class in the beginning to set the stage for your idea. I love that you radiated confidence in your delivery and you gave specific product details that really brought the product to life. I would have loved to hear more statistics on how often scooter theft happens on college campuses to make it feel even more urgent that a product like this needs to exist. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Mady! Great pitch you clearly identified why your 3 in 1 anti-theft and tracker device is needed for scooters. With so many robberies and theft in scooters, especially in college towns like UF, a system in which you can secure your scooter and track it if it is stolen is critical. I thought you had great flow throughout your presentation and highlighted exactly why, how, and who would be affected by your opportunity belief.
ReplyDeleteHey Mady, good job on your elevator pitch. I can tell that you rehearsed this and spent a lot of time trying to get it right. What really carried you was your confidence. Confidence is I feel the most important part of the elevator pitch, because it is vital to selling the product! It builds trust with your audience and makes them more likely to believe in your pitch.
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